Comments on: 100 Word Challenge – Week#32 https://100wc.net/2012/05/23/100-word-challenge-week32/?pk_campaign=feed&pk_kwd=100-word-challenge-week32 Creative writing for young people Wed, 16 Sep 2015 08:51:29 +0000 hourly 1 By: Mrs Halford team 100wc https://100wc.net/2012/05/23/100-word-challenge-week32/?pk_campaign=feed&pk_kwd=100-word-challenge-week32#comment-447 Tue, 29 May 2012 20:18:00 +0000 http://100wc.net/?p=1017#comment-447 This is for 311
Hi Amy, I really liked the way you started your 100wc by challenging the reader. Great persuasion technique. You also included a question and a range of sentence starts and punctuation. Great job. Sorry I couldn’t post this on your class blog.

]]> By: Mrs Halford team 100wc https://100wc.net/2012/05/23/100-word-challenge-week32/?pk_campaign=feed&pk_kwd=100-word-challenge-week32#comment-446 Tue, 29 May 2012 20:15:35 +0000 http://100wc.net/?p=1017#comment-446 Hi Liam, well done for writing for the 100wc. You gave lots of great reasons to take part. It would be hard to come up with an argument against it! To further improve, try to include rhetorical questions and vary your sentence starts. Keep on writing.

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]]> By: Mrs Halford team 100WC https://100wc.net/2012/05/23/100-word-challenge-week32/?pk_campaign=feed&pk_kwd=100-word-challenge-week32#comment-445 Fri, 25 May 2012 11:15:25 +0000 http://100wc.net/?p=1017#comment-445 This comment is for number 53
Hello Sam, what a good idea to write to persuade your (head) teacher for a swimming pool. You gave lots of good reasons which would help to make the reader agree with you. It sounds like this is something that you would like to happen for real. :)

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